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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Tales of Arc (A Final Revised Attempt)

    :smt039 as if nothing were wrong Change were to was(: could feel it himself, that sense of ignorance, ebbing at the hollows of his heart No need for the coma ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Panorama

    Hmm... I choose birds eye view! Okay, here we go! ... Wow. So, I got my quote ready and nothing! It's so good! I didn't see any mistakes!! All right, ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: 43,000 Years Ago, or Before Romeo and Juliette: part one

    Hi! :smt039 Please, please comment! A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Superhero Contest Entry

    Oh! Oh! I got it! I got it! The reason Nemesis is uppercased is because the boy he wrestled is the guy in the ski mask three years later! Right? ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Superhero Contest Entry

    njamin Montgomery knew he was outclassed the moment his Nemesis laid a hand on him; he was faster, he was stronger, an he had better technique. O: Wrestling?! I love ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: When The World Melts Away

    Hey wiseman! (: As I promised, I'll do the best I can! I'm not that experienced with poems but I think I know enough. Like the clouds with their rain ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Bandages: Part One

    Aw thank you!! That means a lot to me, fox! :D There are other parts to the story, indeed! If you check them out, maybe they'll clear a few questions ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: P r o l o g u e _}

    This is a prologue to one of my novels that I've... pushed aside. I thought of it today and it fit perfectly with the scenario of the story. I just ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Reacurring Dream.

    OHOH I WIN I WIN. idk what I win at but I think it's that I know you in person, yay! :D Okay, time for one of Olivia's THOROUGH reviews, ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Revising Hope chapter 5

    Well, hello! I haven't read the other parts so if I have some pretty obvious questions, I'm sorry. Aightt, let's get this started, son! So here it is, the culmination ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Secrets of Desperation ;5

    (Hahahahah! Thanks to Lucy, I seemed to have reposted a chapter. I get lost with it, sorry. So here is the real chapter five.) I have recently printed out all ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Excerpt for Princess

    This is an idea that I had and it's an excerpt from my romance novel, so here ya go! Keyan, Felix, and Millie were an odd bunch. They all had ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: AEOTS The prediction (Prologue)

    Hola!(; First order of business - did you write this in Notepad? I remember I use to write in notepad and when I posted my work it would be spaced ...

    Nov 19, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Life on it's Own [one]

    :D:D:D:D I'm super excited to be starting this! It's taken me forever to figure out who to actually start a sequel but once I started, it just flowed! Now, the ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Titleless Story (6)

    2/2 thorough review! :D “I maybe should have waited?” Should be: Maybe I should have waited? zonked Did you mean 'zoned' or is that some English slang I don't know ...

    Nov 18, 2008


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